- Very well written.

- Lots of good info about how you intend your performance to develop.

- Lots of detail on your intention for how the scenes will work in the final performance.

- Good balance between prepared structure (top scenes) and improvised elements (orange clips).

- Good info on how clip envelopes have been used to vary scenes and give a sense of movement.

- Screenshots are displaying properly in this post.

Points For Improvement

- You very rarely refer to the sounds of the actual clips that make up the scenes, so sometimes its hard for the reader to get a handle on how the performance has been put together (especially if they haven’t had the benefit of hearing the track, as I have).

- You probably sayh too much – the post is very long and would be a more interesting read if it covered less areas or did so in a more concise way.